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The Dog Business -- Resubmitted
by Dog Trainer
While some of the details in this story have been enhanced to ensure that the cocks of the men reading this get hard – very hard – and that some of these men find a strong desire to jack off and decide to do so, it would be a mistake to think this is not based on a true story.------------------------------------------------------
When I sold my first dog a couple of years out of college, it seemed awfully easy. Little did I know there was as large a market for my dogs as there is. It has simply gotten easier and easier once I was able to penetrate the market and became known for the fine K-9's I offer to the men who want them, especially now that I have vastly improved the quality of my products.
My first dog had been my college roommate, both of us intending to go to veterinary school. I had also taken several psychology classes and honed in on hypnosis. My roommate was willing to let me practice on him. What he didn't know was that I soon move past practice and into honest-to-god deep and serious hypnosis of him.
By the time we had finished college, it was not difficult to send him back to Mommy and Daddy with a deep hatred for them – deep enough that he simply, one day, disappeared as far as they were concerned. Oh they searched for him – some. But the animosity I had imbedded in him – and then was built in them as they reacted to him – was strong enough that they were really glad he was gone.
He, of course, came to me. He, of course, immediately became my dog full time, an identity I had been instilling in him since I first began to "practice' on him. His parents will never see him again nor will I. I have no idea where he is now, although I made a nice – very nice – profit when I sold him after a couple of years of owning him to a very nice Mainland Chinese businessman who I had come across through some obscure publications. Does he still own him? I don't know, nor do I care.
I may sound callous about the dog and his parents, but all three were breeders. To this day, I only seek out breeders to transform and sell and so it is only breeder parents, wives, children, and families that feel any pain from what I am doing. Do I care that they suffer? No, not in the least. I consider all of the pain that breeders have and still inflict on those of us who are homosexual and I feel no remorse for returning some of that pain.
And so, here I stand ten years after my first sale in my kennel. I currently have eight dogs, all breeders and all who just disappeared one day, never to be seen by those they knew again.
I no longer use much hypnosis, although it is part of the regimen early on. Chloroform is the first drug I use on them. Puts them out like a light so I can throw them in the cage in the back of my paneled van. As they come to, they vent and rage and threaten. Angry dogs they are. But this does not last. There are so many psychotropic drugs now available that are normally used by mental hospitals to keep their patients docile. When mixed with their food in a bowl, which they eventually eat because they are so hungry, it works just as well on those who are mentally stable. I now have a steady supply of it from a drug manufacturer in Thailand. All I had to do was to provide him two dogs free of charge and he sends me as much of the drugs as I need. As I understand it, the two dogs are now the pets of the whores in a brothel in Lampang in northern Thailand.
While in their drug-induced docility, I am able to hypnotize them easily so I can speak to their subconscious mind and get the transformation off to a more peaceful start. But I have found hypnosis can only go so far because it has to be constantly reinforced. What works ever so much better to patiently wait for the Stockholm Syndrome to kick in, where the captured become dependent on their capturer and will do anything to please him.
Once it kicks in, the dog finds out that if they act as their former self in any way, I can be a cruel sadist. But when they act like the dog they are becoming, I am the most loving, kind and trustworthy person they will ever find. From here on, it is all just standard behavior modification. Be human, be punished. Be a dog, be rewarded. Even the most headstrong breeder eventually acts only as I want them to act because they need to please me so much for their own survival. No more hypnosis is needed. No more psychotropic drugs. Their instinct for survival and need for love and acceptance takes over. It usually takes about nine months for them to never even think of acting other than as a dog and another three for me to be sure they have come to accept what they are and will never be able to return to what they were again.
It is then I start the physical transformation. Yes, I did finish Veterinary School at UC Davis, although I use my training about the body only on the dogs I am creating. There are several changes I make.
The first thing I do is modify their vocal chords. Human sounds that can become speech are no longer a physical option. Right after surgery, they are only able to make deep guttural sounds. I train them how to modify these sounds so they can make their basic needs and feelings known. Quick guttural sounds, made while the mouth snaps open, sound a lot like a bark., Higher pitched sounds held for a while are a whine. Long low sounds are growls. Mix these up, change tone and pitch and the breeder sounds like any other dog.
Of course, no dog has hands which ca pick things up and I am not about to sell a dog at the prices i charge that needs to wear mitten or some other contraption. So, I remove the portion of each of their fingers between their first and second knuckle. I then fuse the last section, the finger tip section, to the remaining section so that last human knuckle does not bend. And, of course, there is no need for an opposible thumb, so the thumbs simply get removed. Perfect front paws and the nails remain intact to protect the tips of those paws as they do for any dog. I always remind the new owners to keep these nails trimmed and rounded so the dog does not accidentally scratch someone.
The rear paws? They are good as they are, although it takes some dexterity training for them to be put down flat when the dog is on all fours. As we know, no dog ever is able to stand on two legs. Also, no dog ever walks on his knees the way those who only play at being a dog do. Snip a few leg tendons; remove parts of a few leg muscles and fuse a couple of back vertebrae together and the dog is physically unable to stand except when on both front and hind paws.
Once the bodies have begun healing, I work on stretching their ball sacs so they hang real low. Having the dogs move around with heavy weights hanging from their balls stretches them in no time at all and, like old elastic, once the skin is stretched out, it does not go back.
I have had some of those who buy my dogs ask me to alter their faces, heads, ears, etc so the dogs look more like natural canines. I do not do this. I do not fancy myself a plastic surgeon and it would be unethical for me to practice in a field of medicine I am not well trained in. If an owner does this later, it is his decision. Hell, he owns the damned thing so he can do what he wants. However, I permanently affix contact lenses to the dogs' eyes so that they can only see in black and white and shades of gray.
It takes about another year for all of these surgeries to heal and the dog to become accustomed enough to their new body for them to be ready to sell. So, by the time I am done, I have invested almost two years into creating and training my dogs. But they are near perfect and thus command top dollar.
Of the eight dogs here in my kennel, four are jew dogs, two are white dogs and two are nigger dogs. When I started, I had no idea how big a market there was for jew dogs. But there are lots of neo-Nazi, Arab, non-Arab Muslims and evangelical Christians who specifically want jew dogs. They are, by far, my biggest sellers.
Both of my white dogs are Americans. There is very little interest in Europeans dogs, probably because Europe's greatness exists only in Europe's mind these days. America is the big dog on the block (pun intended) and as such sell very well. Again, Arabs and Muslims like Americans, as do Asians and Latin Americans. Blond hair, blue eyed, white dogs sell best, although there is a market for those with brown or black hair with brown eyes. Right now I have one blond/blue eyed dog and one brown hair/blue eyed dog. The blond will go first and for a higher price.
Nigger dogs are my boutique dogs. There is a steady market for them, but not as large as the market for jew dogs or white dogs. Some like to buy them simply for their oversized cocks or just the color of their skin. But there seems to be a steady stream of buyers from the Southern United States and Montana and Idaho, as well as from former apartheid countries in the south portion of Africa.
Training? Minimal, outside of simply functioning and being a dog. I leave it to those who buy them to train them in specific skills, be that as a house pet, a hunting dog, a work dog, etc. Since I do not know how their eventual owners will use them, I don't presume anything. Besides, part of the enjoyment of getting a new puppy is to train it, isn't it?
I do train them to sexually satisfy their owners. I only sell these breeders to my brother queers, since we queers are the ones who most deserve to own these breeders. Plus, I don't have to worry about teaching the dogs about satisfying cunts and fat filled breasts and other disgusting body parts like that. But they do learn top lick, suck and swallow cocks, to pleasure with their mouths and paws any part of the owner's body, to mount their owner if the owner wants to be fucked and to use their own assholes and muscles in their chutes to give the greatest pleasure to an owner who wants to mount them.
Of the eight here in my kennel, four are ready for sale. Two jew dogs, the blond white dog and one nigger dog. Tomorrow a buyer is coming in from Dubai. He has reviewed the videos of the four that are for sale. He has said he may want to buy two. Maybe he will, but I'll be surprised if he does. He is interested in both jew dogs and the blond white dog. He has no interest at all in the nigger dog. My guess is he will buy one of the jew dogs, but we'll see.
Because he is considering three dogs, he will be here for three days. I always give a buyer 24 hours with any dog he is interested in so he can decide without any pressure. Once he has made his selection, it will take me about two weeks to prepare the dog for transfer and arrange the transportation to Dubai. The dog will be tranquilized, crated and then shipped and I will not see him anymore and, to be honest, will hardly think of him again.
He will, of course, need to be replaced so I can maintain my inventory. After the past year, I have been pissed as hell at the investment bankers on Wall Street and I want revenge for what they have done to the world. So, the past couple of weeks I have made a few visits to Manhattan and I have my eye on a couple of high-flying investment types who wear $2000 suits and act as if their shit doesn't stink. Both work late into the night, no doubt coordinating with investors in Asia on how to fuck the rest of us over. A little chloroform and they won't be fucking anyone any longer, except on command.
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* The Dog Business -- Resubmitted
00:28 on 2010-01-13
yuch
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* The Dog Business -- Resubmitted
01:29 on 2010-01-13
There is something seriously wrong with the type of person who writes, and enjoys, this trash. Mind control erotica is one thing, but this is just unarousing, ininteresting uninspired revenge wish-fulfillment. It's shit.
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01:51 on 2010-01-13 by ka
i think i know where the author is going...this is a pretty aggressive story and not as enjoyable as it might have been...like in "the campus blog journals"
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02:31 on 2010-01-13 by dougkent60
It is a very good story of it's gendre, because it doesn't fall into the run of the mill category does not make it uninteresting. Let's live and let live shall we.
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05:29 on 2010-01-13
I was disturbed by the anger inherent in this story at first, but willing to read through it. Then when it got to the part about "jew dogs" and "nigger dogs", it made me sick. There is too much history of using phrases like that during genocide and other violent, racist and antisemitic periods to read such words without bias. Maybe the author was putting himself into a character's voice - or maybe he actually talks like this in real life - but either way, it is sick and disturbing.
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07:00 on 2010-01-13
i m sorry, but this is just plain sick.
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* The Dog Business -- Resubmitted
08:34 on 2010-01-13
I rarely say anything negative, but this is offensive material.
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08:51 on 2010-01-13
This is not my cup of tea, but like it or not, there is nothing here that is not a part of the subculture of men dominating the minds and lives of other men. Nor is the supposed anger here unknown in the gay community. The author tells it like it is for a distinct but sizable minority of our community. Perhaps some of us just don't want to see the hard edges of our fantasies. My guess is that many who frequent this site will enjoy this and it will spark many a fantasy in their minds as good stories here should. But after the comments above, most would never have the guts to say how much they enjoyed it. I have to admit, though, I am somewhat disturbed by the author's claim that this is based on a true story.
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* The Dog Business -- Resubmitted
09:07 on 2010-01-13
i am a fan of hypnosis and erotic stories... but this is just plain old offensive
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11:40 on 2010-01-13
I am a Jew. I am submissive. I love to be hypnotized. I love to be controlled. I fantasize about being a dog. I fantasize about serving Nazi Masters. This story has already given me cause to cum. The way it is written gives me lots of room to build lots of fantasies and I expect I'll cum many times based on them. But I guess most of you think I am sick.
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12:17 on 2010-01-13 by collarncuffsboy@yahoo.com
OK, I am going to agree with others regarding the anger element of this story. I honestly dont think it was necessary to have the "jew dog", or "nigger dog" elements. However, aside from that, I think this could be a very good story line. I have read quite a number of different fetish stories online and classify them three ways. 1: I like/love the entire story and will read them many times; 2: I dont like anything at all and will most likely never read it again; and 3: I dont like some parts and do like other parts. When I come across a story that would be the third type, I can usually ignore the parts I dont like. For instance, I have read a story where an overweight man sells suits to young straight men that turns them into older (as in 65 and older), overweight gay men. Now, I have absolutley nothing against older or overwieght men, but they do not turn me on, however I am turned on by guys wearing suits, aand the idea of straight guys hypno'd into becoming suit wearing gay men. When I read that story, I simply ignore the age progression/weight gain elements. This story is a #3 for me, so far. I will ignore the anger elements and focus on the erotic parts.
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13:19 on 2010-01-13
Seems to me the anger here may be dark, blunt and direct, but it is no different than the disguised anger we read here all the time. How many stories do we have of straight jocks getting what they deserve by being hypnotized, drugged or whatever and made to act in ways they would never voluntarily act? Are not those stories the same as this one, except instead of being direct statements they are simple passive-agressive expressions of anger by the authors? Would anyone of those who have condemned this done so if the author had not used the terms jew dog and nigger dog? Probably not. The real complaint seems to be a semantic one -- the use of a couple of highly charged terms. But the author has skillfully created a narrator who is completely amoral, one who acts and talks that way. Bravo to him! Maybe we all should consider the amorality of so many stories here and not complain when the character is portrayed in the same amoral way he acts, not as some nice guy victim just getting even. There really is little difference between the two.
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16:24 on 2010-01-13
Disturbing. Once I got to the throat and hand mutilation, I stopped reading. I guess you have to be a cruel sadist to appreciate this. Written in such a cold manner, I would say the cocks of most men reading this will not get hard at all.
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16:52 on 2010-01-13 by Will
"I do not fancy myself a plastic surgeon and it would be unethical for me to practice in a field of medicine I am not well trained in." Isn't that a bit hypocritical of him? Everything he does is unethical and immoral to the point that he'd be locked away for the rest of his life. This is yet another story that I wish I could "un-read" from my mind, I'm sorry but it's just too horrific and disturbing to really enjoy.
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17:40 on 2010-01-13
Pretty lame, and realy poor
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20:18 on 2010-01-13
I really enjoyed this story. The humiliation and transformation themes were highly erotic. Very well written. I would love to read more of your work! The race theme is a part of life and not offensive to me at all.
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20:58 on 2010-01-13 by boyn2changes
Time and time again, its infuriating to watch authors submit stories to this site only to be told that 'they're sick' simply because of the content of their material. I've got news for you: In many circles, the straight-boy-jock hypnotized to become a gay slut is ALSO considered sick. Fetishes are in the eye of the beholder. Personally, I think that fantasy is LAME. Do I insult the author? Hell no, I move on. I LOVE stories that contain non-consensual physical modifications. Its FANTASY, and I'm not ashamed of what I like. None of us should be... haven't all of us gay folk learned that by now? This story *was* edgy. I wish the plot went into more detail about the transformations. It wasn't one of my favorite stories & could be a lot better. All that said, I encourage the Author to stand up to the couple self-centered-no-story-is-good-unless-its-MY-fetish jerks around here, and continue writing!
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21:06 on 2010-01-13
Weak on all elements, poorly written, and about as erotic as a two by four. Subject aside, this is breaking the cardinal rule of good writing; it is telling and not showing anything. At best, the story works as a sleep aid -- it's duller than cold dishwater.
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21:20 on 2010-01-13
Terrible story full of hate, bigotry and sadistic tendencies...
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22:01 on 2010-01-13
All the intolerant critics need to stop b!tch!ng and moaning. If you feel that adamantly about a story someone took the time to create, pass it over and post something of your own for us to tear apart.
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22:02 on 2010-01-13
I'm surprised at how many of you want your fetish fantasies spoon fed to you in excruciating detail so you need not use your imagination. This one provides enough fertile ground and then allows the reader to take what he wants and develop his own erotic fantasy. I commend the author not only for his daring but also for inviting each of us to start with this and build our own fantasy to jack off to.
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02:17 on 2010-01-14 by dougkent60
I am amazed at the number of critics who have slagged off this story and this author and are unwilling to add their names to their criticism
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05:18 on 2010-01-14
I liked this story. Yes, I know why some of you hate this story. I respect your opinion. But still, I hope you to know that there are also some of us who like to see this "extreme" kind of stories here...
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14:12 on 2010-01-14
Who would have thought that people who come here to read pornography would want that pornography to only include Disney-like characters in it so that no one is too mean? It's OK to have a villain, as long as the villain is destroyed in the end. But the real story has to include birds and chipmunks and the story's characters singing and dancing in the forest. Sheesh!
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16:48 on 2010-01-14
I agree here with those people who DO NOT find this offensive. Everyone has fantasies, and this is one of them. Whether you like it or not is your own business. But PLEASE do not bash the author. He put his work out there for us to read. If you are so offended please take some time and write your OWN stories. Leave him alone!
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19:20 on 2010-01-14 by Hyphap
From an erotic perspective the story did nothing for me--I'm not interested in puppy play period, and the elements of physical mutilation and extreme sadism turned me off even more. (And the use of racially and religiously charged terms was distressing, especially as I'm Jewish.) From a writing perspective, it also had problems. Primarily, there was no plot, just a description of what he did, which isn't very exciting. Also, we never got inside the heads of the dogs, which seems like the most interesting thing--how it feels to be transformed like this. The sadism and darkness were unpleasant, but our fantasies don't have to be PC. As long as the writer doesn't act like this in real life, there's no harm in getting it out--though I probably won't read any more of his stories. If this is how he actually acts, of course, we need to call the cops.
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18:30 on 2010-01-15 by keven
it can be argued that all the stories here are psychologically offensive to some people, however, there is a subjective and thereotically line that can be crossed ie. going too far. i may not be able to categorize what defines that line, but like the supreme court and its definition of "smut" i know it when i see it. i make no judgement about the author, but this is offensive on so many levels and needs to be deleted from the site.
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19:30 on 2010-01-15
what would we do if a straight guy came here one day and got genuinely upset at all the stories that are really cruel to guys just because they are straight? Would we delete them all? This site is undeniably hetero-phobic and violent - how is this story different? It mentions race but is not necessarily racist (whites, jews, asians and black people are converted into dogs).
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19:32 on 2010-01-15
in fact, reading through those parts again it seems a commentary on geo-politics, including US activity in Iraq, Israeli activity in Palestine and the fading power of Europe post WWII.
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21:19 on 2010-01-15
lighten up this is fiction, watch OZ on TV much the same. if you don't like it don't read it.
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21:28 on 2010-01-15
I thought the story was funny! Then predictable. Then boring. I was waiting for the shaved chest hair to become fur balls for the poodles' ankles! "It would be a mistake to think this was not based on a true story" -- yeah. Sure. LOL.
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22:37 on 2010-01-15
I can understand about some being offended but its a story and we read it. I actually liked it alot. Yes I agree some words should have been left out but again its his story. So I give it two paws up.
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08:50 on 2010-01-16
if only this story was true. not so keen on the surgery but still fascinating. would love to see a dog like this
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10:22 on 2010-01-16 by LLOYD
C'mon - the "jew dog" and "nigger dog" bit may be a bit gratuitous, but in the context of the story, not inappropriate. Not exactly my thing, but an ineresting scenario for sure. I think most of the comments are way out of line. IT'S A STORY!
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10:28 on 2010-01-16
FUCK YEA! Great story
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21:33 on 2010-01-16
I need mind soap now.
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03:18 on 2010-01-17
hahaha I love the NCMC you guys rock
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09:51 on 2010-01-17 by curiosity1
Now I'm just p.o'd. I can't even post a comment about not being able to post my comment on this story. I give up. I resign myself to passively reading and not responding at all.
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10:39 on 2010-01-21
This story was amazing, I love reading up on these. Thanks for posting.
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15:39 on 2010-01-23
This is not really a story. More the statement of a very dark and bland fantasy from a very frustrated person.
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00:58 on 2010-01-24
It's sad that a controversial story gets more conversation than a really good one. Who gives a crap about how "taboo" this is? Most of these stories are anyways.
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19:57 on 2010-01-24
would lobe subsequent stories about this
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18:22 on 2010-02-02 by doc
Not the first time this has come up here. My question is, are there ANY guidelines here? Is ANY fantasy ok? All the "hetero folks might be offended too" stuff is lame because it's clearly a gay oriented site. Now if this is a violence oriented site, and if that's a key part of this site, then cool, I'll stick with MCstories.com but I thought this site was supposed to be some kind of extension of the eroticgayhypnosis site, with more stories. Silly me for paying attention to the URL!
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18:26 on 2010-02-10 by terry
woooof sound perfect being forced transformed would like to see a story of one being transformed
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18:27 on 2010-02-10
slavedog6996@yahoo.com
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08:46 on 2010-02-11
author needs to stop writing
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10:55 on 2010-02-11
Get rid of the who buys what breed for what reason igs just so off putting
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10:58 on 2010-02-11
He needs to use code wirds or. Bred for the "nigger dog and white dogs" ect i dont know maby gay golan retrever or what ever is apropeiot
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15:44 on 2010-03-09 by peter
wow gsreat story been dreaming about this one.........
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