Smoke Bound
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* Smoke Bound
03:27 on 2010-01-14
Why not just call your story "---------------------------------"?
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* Smoke Bound
12:18 on 2010-01-14
Way too short. Would've liked to see more to this.
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* Smoke Bound
15:41 on 2010-01-14
Story? Did I miss something?
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* Smoke Bound
20:05 on 2010-01-14
THIS STORY WAS ON MCSTORIES AND IS JUST AS DULL NOW AS IT WAS THERE
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* Smoke Bound
21:11 on 2010-01-14
The cranky pants are out in force today. I liked it!
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* Smoke Bound
10:02 on 2010-01-15 by ka
premise is good....i like these types of stories and this one could definitely go for more detail/ development... please go for it.
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* Smoke Bound
23:25 on 2010-01-17
Great story. I like it when there are not too many details and i can fill in fantasy myself.
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* Smoke Bound
00:02 on 2010-01-18
Very good start though I would have liked to have had more...
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* Smoke Bound
13:36 on 2010-01-20
Liked it, but would be great to read the juicy details of how he is programmed, perhaps resisting but ultimately giving his mind completely to this stranger. Maybe good Wiki material?
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