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* Man of my Dreams (Part 1)
00:55 on 2010-01-09 by dougkent60

A wonderful start
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* Man of my Dreams (Part 1)
03:20 on 2010-01-09

nice - I really liked it. Maybe more dialogue as it helps drive a narrative forward?
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* Man of my Dreams (Part 1)
08:47 on 2010-01-10

part II please! can't wait
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